| A Poem to Pass the T:ME
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| I threw my watch into a river | 1 |
hoping that something beautiful would come from pain | 2 |
Ha! | 3 |
what a sorry wretch | 4 |
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you kissed it in the rain | 5 |
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it was waterproof | 6 |
I wonder if it still ticks | 7 |
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15 Mar 06 |
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watches from the bottom of rivers...
this poem reminds me of "where the wild roses grow"
— bettalpha
why?
— Kauf
Mmm... I really like this. I don't know why. The 'time' in the title is clever (reminds me of Bright Eyes' "A Song To Pass The Time") and nice use of exclamation in line 3. Overall, a gentle and pleasing read.
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— musicwords
I like this!
— livedeeply
i liiiiike this..
it's quick and has movement, excellent word choices, reminds me of Woolf in a stream-of-consciousness sort of way.
nice 8)
— misspanda
It has the ring of intellect and yet still my brains feels empty.
Meep
— unknown
It has the ring of intellect and yet still my brain feels empty.
Meep
— unknown
yes i agree with meep
May your life be filled with happiness, and your heart never broken
-Nathan-
— unknown
May your life be filled with happiness, and your heart never broken
-Nathan-
— unknown
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