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aphrodisiac
hank

garlic steamed wild broccoli
 1
wrapped by thin sliced seasalt
 2
cured spanish ham con peppered
 3
salmon see life can be so simple
 4
if you let it be enjoyed new
 5
like it was made to be for me
 6
by you
 7
and reminded me of that raw
 8
scallop i ate covered in ocean
 9
straight from fluted venus shell
 10

15 Mar 06

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Awesome!  Now THIS appeals to me.  I'd very much like to eat your work, if I may :)
 — CervusWright

to quote a friend- soup is good food.
 — hank

Food is sex and sex is food...discuss
 — Macbear73

beautiful detail - savorous
interesting line breaks
i like your poem
 — bettalpha

succling succatash.
 — hank

sufferin succatash sylvester
more cartoon poems
are needed
pronto

succatash [big word love]
even the food.
 — bettalpha

now i'm hungry.
nice poem hank.
lines 4-7 are amazing.

-varun-
 — unknown

clever
 — WordsAndMe

ew seafood
 — Meep

i know for sure there is a speeling mistake in here somedewheres

just gotta put my wittle clit on it

mariposa
 — unknown

MMMM Have you ever tried roast whale or lantern fish soup,really good to get the juices flowing but stay near a toilet
 — larrylark

roast whale would feed a village, no?
 — hank

how bout vennisson with morels?


i escudo on you!


Elizabeth
 — unknown

Not to quote a friend, ew sea-food!!
 — unknown

sex
 — Empty

Is it really? I hate cooked broccoli, will aparagus work?
 — unknown

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