| day break, a moment
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sparrow
| Beneath the endless arcs of bare, black branches | 1 |
lining a lakeside promenade, | 2 |
where shadows fade into slivers of silhouettes | 3 |
and dawn-like mists; | 4 |
whisper into the silence:"Spring is coming." | 5 |
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18 Mar 06 |
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wow! what an image.
incredible write sparrow.
— unknown
Active voice, common imagery, sounds in the silences, shared emotion-- Bravo!
— mcverse
thanks so much for your comments!
— sparrow
wowsa.
this is breathtaking and captivating i quite enjoyed the read. the images that this conjures, are clear and crisp. the flow is quite good too. it makes me crave for more! maybe there will be a poem about the summer soon? lol.
overall, a great read that i will enjoy again and again.
— SweetPain
That's just fine.
— netskyIam
i just read this aloud.
gorgeouss
— ileviyou
I just realised that I haven't thanked you guys for your comments yet so here it is: thank you very much!
— sparrow
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