Comments:
no comments homies?
— SweetPain
boy, would I like one of our musicians to put this to music and sing it.
I'd like more of the story, please.
— Isabelle5
I love it!! its great something i would like to read and or try to write. ( note the try) @_@
— Hidden_words
haha, Isabelle do you want me to tell you, or are you saying i should add to the poem?
lol Hidden_words, trust me good poems are directly relative to time. You will better this or any other poem you think is good, in time.
— unknown
I want more poem, I want a short story based on this, I want it all, I tell ya!
— Isabelle5
lol i dont think there is anything i can add to this poem Isabelle I'm sorry. But i could e-mail you the whole heart breaking TRUE story.
— SweetPain
I see it now, quite clearly. I wish I could supply the missing story but Fate has an agenda of its own. Imc
— Isabelle5
I really like its simplicity. The enjambment is used perfectly, too.
— WordsAndMe
i agree, fate does have an agenda of its own. thanks isabelle, the oh so wise one.
and thanks WordsandMe, i am happy you liked it :D!
— SweetPain
soft, tranquil and calm.
I lake the ending¨
-sparrow
— unknown
thanks sparrow :D,.
— SweetPain
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