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Why Did We Ever Part?
lieskilllies

I couldn't shake in my shoes if I tried.
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We're leaving footwear on High Tide's lips
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and kissing dry sand goodnight.
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It's getting chilly,
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pull your sleeves down.
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It's not all our fault,
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don't worry.
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Don't worry.
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Pull your hair back
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(rosey red hair)
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while you pull my heartstrings.
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(cherry red cheeks)
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Graduating from peek-a-boo
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to hide-and-go seek.
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I'm in knots and not's
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over what I haven't got.
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I hear that you're getting fucked all over the place these days. Shame.

20 Mar 06

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nice. awsome. keep writing.
 — unbreakable

Enjoyable read :)
 — CervusWright

because ego, faithlessness, fear and the past get in the way. because people let these things get in the way... that's why...
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