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on the nature of rage
wendz

i.
 1
 
 
here is the time for searing red
 2
to melt away velvet darknesses
 3
concealed behind eyelids.
 4
 
 
here is the time for lava to spew forth
 5
from the layers of mantle -
 6
the world is cracking.
 7
 
 
ii.
 8
 
 
heaven and hell are both pawns in limbo,
 9
the surface tension of water is being bubbled
 10
into steam latent with the heat of repressed years.
 11
 
 
the gods can do nothing but watch
 12
whilst the earth simmers in its own heat.
 13
 
 
here is the wait.
 14
 
 
iii.
 15
 
 
water bubbles on,
 16
for there is neither more or less
 17
than when the gods were still young.
 18
 
 
after hissing for so long,
 19
even magma must give way to black rocks
 20
hoisting high their new limbs -
 21
similar to old, but not quite the same.
 22
 
 
now, the scouring is complete.
 23
 
 
iv.
 24
 
 
the gods have returned to the heavens and hells,
 25
released after being held for so long in anticipation
 26
of a final confrontation between heat and water,
 27
though each knew that cool eventually consumes heat,
 28
like winter inevitably engulfs summer.
 29
 
 
v.
 30
 
 
a shoot pushes through black rock,
 31
finding a small pore to uncoil first limb.
 32
 
 
here is the time for healing.
 33

21 Mar 06

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Whats happened? All of a sudden people are writing readable poetry on this site. This is very readable, I shall read it over and over. Thanks.
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It's been a great afternoon for me, way over here.  All this excellent poetry.  Good stuff!
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Brilliant and a complete circle.  Very nice.
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Good poem.
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beautiful work
 — varun

especially against the title... the poem is wonderful.
really... really cool.
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