29 Mar 06
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an IV drug user? is that what this is?
interesting. I guess I wonder what your purpose of writing this is. i like how brief it is, but I can't shake the sense that its incomplete.
Blood. I need more than this; though I can come up with something on my own, I want your story. (imc)
blood, iv's. nothing to do with this poem. good try. keep trying.
i thought of a tree. afterwards.
is it about masturbation ?.
Is it about the big head you get on a badly poured Guinness .
oh. i see. but was it salvaged?
maybe delete "the" in line eight. might help with timing. but overall good.
come on hank.... pleeeease won't you tell us what this is about?
I don't understand this, either, and that bothers me. =(
i think the clue is in line 6 j&f
this is about envy...
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