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note to self
hank

do not separate the head
 1
let the head be embedded
 2
 
 
letting the head be embedded
 3
tends to express intimacy
 4
 
 
there are no important details
 5
to hit the floor
 6
what is important is only
 7
what is left behind
 8

30 Mar 06


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If this has a sexual conotation, then I love it.  If not, then I'm confused.  Either way, could be written a bit better - revise and repost?
 — WordsAndMe

intimacy can be
reassuring
or even scary
for some
but mostly it is
fear that taints
the embedded
head to explode
and over-
compensate for
pasts and the
future by
closing the door
tight.

nice poem hank.

-varun-
 — unknown

nice poem varun. feel like i may know you.
 — hank

may is a month away.

thanks hank.
 — unknown

good poem. interesting.
 — listen

http: //www.priceless420.com/Pr042406notetoself.jpg
 — unknown

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