| "taught in schools"
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netskyIam
| please pardon the nasty words-
both were necessary here
-Tanks to wantsaname for the great finish-
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Taught in schools | 2 |
before we spawned | 3 |
we learned as roe | 4 |
of carnal charms. | 5 |
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As fish are fools | 6 |
and nature rules | 7 |
and dicks are tools | 8 |
and cunts are holes | 9 |
and men are moles | 10 |
and babies boles | 11 |
in trunks of would | 12 |
we could and did | 13 |
Go fiSH ! | 14 |
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1 Apr 06 |
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Why do you keep re-posting this crap? It's incredibly superficial and reads like it belongs on a bathroom wall. Get over yourself, Netsky.
— unknown
interesting. flows well. i think i might like it, especially the first stanza.
— livella
this is really interesting,
but why is there Go Fish in the end??
— unknown
it's a card game played by kids, for one thing (maybe that's not remembered any more, and maybe it was only in the usa?)
the likening is to "fish" as we are all programmed about as simply as are real fish.
only our brains are capable of a lot of other, higher thoughts.
at basis, though: we are poor fish-
and must follow the biological imperatives.
— netskyIam
the o1d crow is a 17 year old poetry commentary vandal
(just so you all know why he posts unknown lately)
I hope all can ignore slanders which will be further slapped on these poems.
give credit to the kid: he's persistently naughty.
— netskyIam
If I were to rate this nonsense, I would give it a 4 tops. You are the site's April Fool. Collect a few shreds of dignity before you totally discredit yourself.
— unknown
You're not critcizing the poem, but only attacking the poor-fish author
in the usual, irresponsible way. I don't mind, myself,
but the rise you give
to every one of my poems that -you vandalize- takes attention and visibilty
away from the other poets,
who do not deserve this hassle of getting their
poems sidetracked by PC vandal's activities.
This is the last time I'll address the issue
here.
Keep the personal attacks on the message board , please. Thank you.
— netskyIam
absolute shite
— flaminhot
superb!
— kimado
Taught in schools 2
before we spawned 3
we learned as roe 4
of carnal charms. 5
As fish are fools 6
and nature rules 7
and dicks are tools 8
and cunts are holes 9
and men are moles 10
and babies boles 11
In trunks of would 12
we could and did 13
Go fiSH ! 14
just my take on it
— wantsaname
wantsaname: your idea rules! very cool. adopted! thanks!
— netskyIam
Oh, yah, wantsaname made the crappy ending into a fine, perfect fin.
It had been plain "Go Fish" spaced down one line.
wantsaname, I owe ya! Box of seegars? New car?
You're the star of this poem commentary from here on out.
— netskyIam
stupid poem, moronic, in fact
— unknown
thanks for all your helps
— netskyIam
I like it.
I like you too, Netsky.
This is me, not being mean.
Yay!
— povertea
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