orange balloon has cut off some air
from the rest of the room
memories awake us from dreams
and balloon moves its own way
while i am away seemingly
and like memories balloon
stalks me from each new settlement
even when i surprise it
13 Apr 06
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I like balloooons.
and a balloon.
your balloon is frightening, however, which I don't like.
oh, youre right#
i like your poem.
i will send you something about a blue balloon
i didn't write but it but i think you'll like it. maybe not.
need to dig it out from the pileofbooksonthelanding first.
line 3 is stunning
how goes it hank?
a decent half awake poem.
Pretty great, I like how the words individually sound too cliché or too modernized but together they're perfect. Good writing.
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