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hank
| orange balloon has cut off some air | 1 |
from the rest of the room | 2 |
memories awake us from dreams | 3 |
and balloon moves its own way | 4 |
while i am away seemingly | 5 |
and like memories balloon | 6 |
stalks me from each new settlement | 7 |
even when i surprise it | 8 |
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13 Apr 06 |
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I like balloooons.
and a balloon.
your balloon is frightening, however, which I don't like.
— unknown
oh, youre right#
— hank
i like your poem.
i will send you something about a blue balloon
i didn't write but it but i think you'll like it. maybe not.
need to dig it out from the pileofbooksonthelanding first.
— bettalpha
line 3 is stunning
— syzygy
how goes it hank?
nice poem.
-varun-
— syzygy
a decent half awake poem.
— hank
Pretty great, I like how the words individually sound too cliché or too modernized but together they're perfect. Good writing.
— radiogirl
nice.
— hank
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