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Dangerous Toy Poem
netskyIam

Recalling 1970
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when we delinquents sported
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pairs of brittle balls on strings
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Huh? Say what?
 4
 
 
This is the why
 5
we all lived for Clackers®
 6
and the raucous, rhythmic knocks
 7
our duking skills engendered:
 8
 
 
Clack Clack, Clack Clack
 9
ClackClack, ClackedyClack
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CRACK
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A Clacker® ball of polyester
 12
resin popped and split
 13
my eye and Tommy Jones'
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jugular—got nicked.
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He'd nearly tied the record of
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a nostril cut half off
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another broken record champ
 18
who'd won three quartered ears;
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not to mention hairline fractures
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and some ancillary scalpings.
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Oh, those Clackers® in recall
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soon increased in street value,
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because the final sets had sold.
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Then all we had were chippers:
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flint-eyed rocks on ropes—
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no fight left in the clockers,
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not even knocking rights.
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Sad, the wind down of our boxers
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—though it had been quite an era.
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Too bad
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the peerage points won in our matches
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didn't compensate the laughter
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so many surgeons snapped off when
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they had us all in stitches.
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16 Apr 06

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http://tinyurl.com/nyfwl
 — unknown

here we see an example of a faked signature.
A real, signed commentary would have the poster's name in italic.

It is not so clever after all.  
  
Pranks and 1's are on the way again.
When I grow weary of the poots,
I'll erase your comments and reinstall the poem with
any -real- commentaries intact.  


Real poets are welcome for other reasons: for perspectives and helps
that never come from liddle lice heads.

Reid
 — netskyIam

those things r deadly sos your poem.
 — unknown

yea i agreee lol good one
 — unknown

tweaked it a little more.  
this toy was on the market for about one year (1970).
we beat the shit out of each other with Clackers.
fun!
 — netskyIam

Is that site part of the poem? That makes absolutely no sense.. If so it completely enhances the poem! I enjoyed it! What a great read! When can we expect a poetry book from Mr. Reid?
 — MrTom

Thank you Mr.Tom.  I've adjusted the poem a bit.  The link shows the original Clackers.
These things were very popular around 1971.  We had a blast with 'em
BTW:  you are the first person to call me "Mr. Reid" since Tiny Tim was living and called me "Mr. Reid".  I like that.  That's cute.  He was a very nice person: our Mr. Tim.
 — netskyIam

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