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waiting in the President's Garden.
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suddenly longing (lightly as autumn leaves descending,
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moving inward
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through
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the bathroom window, sweeping
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to and fro the tiles, stepping lightly
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against what's a foreign floor, touching mildly the walls)
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for a long-legged girl, sleeping sickly on a near left-side,
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sinking unkindly
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beneath her heavy white breasts; breathing.
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sniffling red nosed.but with
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legs bare, o, i fear -- legs bare, spreading slowly, separating.
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eyes inviting.
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                               sneeze.
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                               i seize.
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there (a gunshot in the garden but even quicker and with rhythm this time
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the red wet flesh at my  hips, delicious. dancing.)
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25 Apr 06

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