poetry critical

online poetry workshop


rift between peoples
technologically rent
end on our knees
for the wrong reasons
wait for our wrest
rend the four seasons

28 Apr 06

Rated 3 (5.5) by 1 users.
Active (1):
Inactive (1): 3, 8

(define the words in this poem)
(460 more poems by this author)

(1 user considers this poem a favorite)

Add A Comment:
Enter the following text to post as unknown: captcha


say what?
 — unknown

this may be to much for you.
 — hank

money and survival i think...
 — unknown

by the way, nice poem hank

 — unknown

continuously fighting for survival...
 — unknown

a nice statement about society.
this poem achieves obscurity without becoming completely... obscure.

i nice,intellectual read.
good job!
 — SweetPain

This poem reminds me of American Society.  Each line seems to actually describe the things we are as a country, and the things we are not, all in 21 words.  Those 21 words seem to say so much!
 — jrwentzel

 — hank