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rend
hank

rift between peoples
 1
technologically rent
 2
end on our knees
 3
for the wrong reasons
 4
wait for our wrest
 5
rend the four seasons
 6

28 Apr 06

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say what?
 — unknown

this may be to much for you.
sorry.
 — hank

money and survival i think...
 — unknown

by the way, nice poem hank

-varun-
 — unknown

continuously fighting for survival...
 — unknown

a nice statement about society.
this poem achieves obscurity without becoming completely... obscure.

i nice,intellectual read.
good job!
 — SweetPain

This poem reminds me of American Society.  Each line seems to actually describe the things we are as a country, and the things we are not, all in 21 words.  Those 21 words seem to say so much!
 — jrwentzel

yes
 — hank

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