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the fools

do all efforts come to those
effortless personalities those
who like me maybe
do not lose a certain
or gain
or just lost in that
a comfortable robe
an apple blossom
or a heavy pole over shoulder

29 Apr 06

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yes, traveller. i think so.
the beaten track is yet another track beaten by its own virtue of existence. though, i couldn't walk it again. over and over.

i find lines 6 and 7 a little confusing. but that's me of course. i'll come back.

nice poem hank.

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yes, but is the comfort of love enough? i've been told not. mmm...
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great poem.
 — listen

yeah, got it.
i like this one. more.

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