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bbq
OKcomputer

bitch please.
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2 May 06

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this poem made me laugh soooooooooooo hard. i love you deeply (in a poet-to-poet kinda way). wow...great poem.
 — zackrabbit

ADD-ON:

almost as funny as suicide by kite. this fucking smells funny, too.
 — zackrabbit

!!!

Simply amazing!!!

Aj89das.
 — unknown

if there's a joke, i don't get it, but this is great.
 — aerol

Excellent. 10
 — gingerdave

YOU ARE RETARDED
 — unknown

hard to tell whether you mean

bbq bitch, please. or, bbq okcomputer, bitch, please. or, something altogether beyond my ability to grasp

either way please seems incongruous

- what am I missing?
 — bettalpha

zackrabbit  ................I feel pity
 — Meep

these people are obviously using the site as their own private message board.
there is nothing literary or remotely interesting about stuff like this
 — unknown

What do you mean by 'these people'?

Racist.
 — OKcomputer

lol
 — FemmeInLA

more potato salad, dear?
 — starr

have you seen pictures of me? ;) he wishes.
 — OKcomputer

shit. where?
 — OKcomputer

i thought i deleted those.
 — OKcomputer

how much are you willing to pay?
 — OKcomputer

10 billion dollars. is this plausible?
 — OKcomputer

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