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donkey
hank

when i am an ass for
 1
instance
 2
can not stand the phone
 3
but
 4
waiting for your call
 5
and then when you do
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call
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i take it out on you
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because the ring
 9
oh that damn ring
 10
i act like an ass
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have you ever heard
 12
a donkey bray?
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31 May 06


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too disj    ed I think       phone     cutting out.
 — unknown

Hmm. I like goat better. I'll ruminate on this one for a while.
 — dandy

I like the frustation in the line breaks, but the ending is a little anticlimatic for me.
 — lai

stupid.
 — hank

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