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How I Chose my PC Screenname
netskyIam

Choose your Username
 1
computer worm
 2
 
 
OK!!!
 3
 
 
marciastamplicker
 4
 
 
lovinganthrax
 5
 
 
skeezix
 6
 
 
fuckadoodle
 7
 
 
campariandsoda
 8
 
 
IDEA!!!
 9
 
 
sodajerker
 10
 
 
jerkeroffer
 11
 
 
offerfreebie
 12
 
 
freebiecostly
 13
 
 
costlybitch
 14
 
 
bitchslapper
 15
 
 
slapperhappy
 16
 
 
happysad
 17
 
 
sadsacker
 18
 
 
sackerpotatoes
 19
 
 
potatoeschippy
 20
 
 
chippydippy
 21
 
 
dippychocolate
 22
 
 
chocolatelate
 23
 
 
latecherry
 24
 
 
cherrymarischino
 25
 
 
marischinotranny
 26
 
 
trannypresident
 27
 
 
presidentcheney
 28
 
 
cheneyganger
 29
 
 
gangerwhanger
 30
 
 
whangerdangle
 31
 
 
dangledangerous
 32
 
 
dangerousdan
 33
 
 
dandanburydoubledamn
 34
 
 
damnthetorpedos
 35
 
 
torpedotunisia
 36
 
 
tunisiaishot
 37
 
 
shotdeadI
 38
 
 
deadIam
 39
 
 
Iamnetsky
 40
 
 
netskyIam
 41
 
 
(late of Tunisia)
 42

2 Jun 06

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not a poem but fun to read
I used to play this game in high school algebra class with debra
in 1970
 — unknown

I didn't know that!  
Well, few new wheels are invented. I  thought I had a new word game.
Fat fuckin'chance'othat.  
Phat anyway. Thank you for commenting and laughing. I'm happy.
 — netskyIam

unknown is right: it's not a poem as poems are generally termed. It's sure not prose.
It's also more than a simple, unrelated list.  Inasmuch as the silly images all dovetail,
then there is a multiplicity of images brought forth in succession.  It compact them all
in a small number of words.  Ergo, it must be a species of poem.  Just not what -I'd-
generally call a poem.  But, yeah, it must be a poem unless there's some more precise word out there.  Like "sheiss" or "poople".

hah.
 — netskyIam

i read this and going through it i got hungry =/ neat way to choose a name though. it gave me a smile
 — xtormentedx

I will see if I can ask my friend what we used to call that game!
 — unknown

Shit I'm not on the list, I guess I'm not getting (to the anthology either :o()

Oh well,

Redsky in the morning
Roots warning don't let
the O1ldCrow sing
Else you get Mor
than expected
NetSkyIam
or am I it's be asked
To be or not to be
I say 2p or not 2p
ones have already gone,
get yourself Hobby,
and remember if anyone can Ka can!

[just as I’m typing this out I think there is strong merit a poem like this being done for real, Reid good fellow, I believe you could pull it off [so don't play with it so much!] Here is the challenge - make a serious poem using usernames to replace similar sounding word or phrases. in fact I’m going to open this up to boards!
Welchy you have a head start - Go!
 — unknown

Aha, Right Above Me,

You just created Concept.  I made a silly pome that springboarded Your Concept. Hooray.  I hope you will take Your idea now and Do It!  Yes, thanks. That's exciting. Thanks for applying new thought.  Yuppers never ever become scuppers.
 — netskyIam

Interesting ramble into the process of finding self, and expressing it via a username.

The IDEA!! turn-point is over-stated and, besides being too dramatic, contains characters often not available as folder names for many operating systems: netskyIam would know this, and likely use it as an exploit into vulnerable systems.

Read aloud, this has rhythm.
 — DianaTrees

HI Diana.  You hit it: "netskyIam would know this, and likely use it as an exploit into vulnerable systems."  Yes, we are -all- worms wanting to burrow into other's mental states.  It's what we do:  manipulate thoughts.   Power trippin' wormies, all of us.
Thank you,  netskiss.
 — netskyIam

yes please do the same for 'morchius'
 — unknown

Dear netsky

I appreciate you posting this informative poem all the way from Tunisia.Is it too late for me to refund your postage?

Larry first class Lark
 — larrylark

Larry:

Post age = death.  Sorry, no refunds accepted.  

Pssst: The Italians were in Algeria.  
We may state confidently that
some Algerians were in Italians.
 — netskyIam

What a waste of space. You are such a narcissist, it defies all reason.
 — unknown

  Behold,  above me, the Flying Harpy ^
lol! She doesn't even know what the word means.
She cannot create.  Only castigate.
I'll have fun at her expense.  
All she can do is rate me 1 to her 0
Squeezix!!
 — netskyIam

i like worm
 — unknown

that was fun.
 — jenakajoffer

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