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hank

i know that oasis
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the band
 2
took their name from the edge
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of a coin
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but that is not what i want to talk about
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have you ever loved? so
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the wrinkle
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the mad
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the mess
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and the love
 10
the care
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and the worth
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you know who you are
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this is becoming easy
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for vanessa

7 Jun 06

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This seems very disjointed.  I'd suggest dropping the whole first verse.  Or explain it.
 — unknown

For gods sake , i know its a diary for you . just try and make it more light hearted .
Slinky , ball , virgin , what is going on with the latest poems ......?
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i wonder if they who what you're talking about.
but learning the lesson isn't that easy. it requires self-awareness...
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this seems to fade away.
 — hank

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