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LUCKY
gnormal

THE NEWS HIRT:
 1
WHITE BIRDS HIT.
 2

20 Apr 02

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hah!
 — Point5

Great stuff, Norm, but is it pastry? How about DUCKY or even SUCKY perhaps MUCKY (hmmm... perhaps not).
 — unknown

I like it -- welcome back, gnorm.
 — unknown

clevah.
 — jade

Meh, bit silly.
 — Moose

gnormal, you are the most underappreciated poet on this site.
 — unknown

clever, indeed. -Shattered
 — unknown

more poems about teddy bears
 — unknown

k im stupid and dont get it...care to explain anyone?
 — unknown

this website is the suckiest website I've ever went on.
 — unknown

the new shirt
white bird shit

get it now?

root
 — unknown

this poem is cool
 — tragicbubble

THE NEWS
HOES! DOGS
HIT ON SIDE
WALK SQUARE

-NEW
DULL MAN
 — unknown

I feel so stupid: I started looking up 'hirt' on dictionary.com, thinking it was a verb I didn't know ... Ha ha.

Fun poem.
 — unknown

myeh
 — unknown

SPLAT!  Cute poem gnormal!  :-)
 — starr

yeah, i didn't understand it at first either.

ohm ye yes a rehurt, yo ufo old ear to PC.
; )
 — fractalcore

make that


GNORMAL
fractalcore

yes ohm ye yes a
rehurt by yo ufo
old ear to PC.


senryu #2
written 6/3/08
thanks, gnormal.
; )
 — fractalcore

just revisiting.

nice, a in' tit?
: )
 — fractalcore

poetry? really?
 — Anachocolata

well, if it gets you thinking and scratching your
head for gawd knows how long, then it certainly
has allowed you the illusion and experience of
time while riding the words you've just read.

may BMWrong, maybe MNO....T, hehe.
; )
 — fractalcore

i think 'hit' deserves a line
of its own, though.

what do you think?
; )
 — fractalcore

Questioning what poetry is
Is often but not always
A useful exercise in writing
Your own.
 — gnormal

welcome back.
; )
 — fractalcore

;)
 — psychofemale

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