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i promise the next will be longer
hank

what i remember is this
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8 Jul 06

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my response was 'oh fuck'.
 — hank

i add my own interpretation and rue my clean panties for a smutty mind. but only for a moment or two.

betty
 — unknown

bravo, beauty betty!  make the next comment longer, promise..
 — unknown

i missed
 — varun

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