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to what do you give
hank

if in waking as we come down
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could have the same effect
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as one little drop of water
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6 Aug 06

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no one wants to leave heaven so soon. huh?

it's some strange religion, yesterday. when you still don't know what it means to be alive, today.

betty
 — unknown

This reminded me of the roots of my poem, Simple Meditation

http://poetry.tetto.o rg/read/31983/

and I wondered if you would say more about this. It is lovely.
 — Meredith

are all
 — varun

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