good. rhymes. hello hank i'm not surprised, your simplicity is always bliss. the relaxed rhyme is good for the relaxed poem, as reiterated upon line five. and as usual sparing words is a strength. — listen
You must know that unless you are 5 years old, this is rather a juvenile poem, right? — Isabelle5
Usually ravens symbolize death.
Acording to Edgar Allen Poe and other people (mostly those who can predict death)
Is that what u were going at?
Or just being random?
Or is there another theme?
Enlighten me — PoisonPoet_x