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Knitted Fringe
larrylark

I realised as I knitted
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my beautiful winter scarf,
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I'd started to come unhinged.
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I will never again for a bet or a laugh,
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allow my flat mate to razor my fringe.
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22 Aug 06

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Wah?! I quite like it! I was sitting here thinking 'please be a funny poem, I'm bored of my chemistry coursework' and hey presto! hehehe Nice.
 — dele

Copme on now Dele

Don't abandon your chemistry coursework for the ephemera of poetry, where's your sense of discipline?

Larry lying around all day watching reruns and drinking copious amounts of larger out of cans that litter the floor of an apartment that hasn't been cleaned since May 2003 Lark
 — larrylark

V. funny and amusing. The fringe isn't though.
 — opal

Dear Opal

I always endevour to bring a ray of sunshine into this world.

Larry sunbeam lark
 — larrylark

haha! larry you never fail to make me laugh. cheers.
 — bear

pretty amusing, good for you! warm too.
 — bleach

Dear Bear,

I love a bear who laughs.

Larry call of the wild Lark
 — larrylark

Dear Bleach

I do find visual stimuli... well stimulating, Don't you. Glad you liked this one

Larry demon barber Lark
 — larrylark

Excellent, this made me laugh. Hope the fringe goes back soon.
 — marieF

Quite nice take on the pic but reads rather awkwardly.
 — unknown

Dear marieF

If you ever want a short back and sides i'm your man

Larry scissor hands Latk
 — larrylark

Slightly funny.  Which was it, a bet or a laugh?  Are you knitting the scarf to cover what you lost???
 — Isabelle5

Dear Unknown

If i could ever stop being an awkward customer i would hopefully write less awkwardly.

Larry awkward squad Lark
 — larrylark

Dear Isabelle

I am a lttle disappointed with your reply as i always expect that you will explain to me how i cover my losses.

Larry threadbare Lark
 — larrylark

Larry, I was just thinking that you'd probably need a REALLY LONG scarf!  hahahahaha
 — Isabelle5

Dear Isabelle

Yes i guess i do. I wouldn't want to go to any length to embarass folks and i always like to amply cover my tracks.

Larry knit one pearl one lark
 — larrylark

Knit one, purl one.  Pearl one is pretty explicit, too...
 — unknown

Beautiful... Is this done using a format?
I really enjoyed this one.
 — aforbing

Dear Unknown

Its that old crochet

Larry in stitches lark
 — larrylark

Dear Aforbing

Its an entry for the Foyo competition. Log on that message on the board to get to the picture this poem attempts to describe

Larry fish eye Lark
 — larrylark

Ah - Spoke Miligna live and knitting - great mad one.
 — dia

Sorry foyo should read Foto

Larry
 — larrylark

Along side Micheala Bentanine, Harold Seatrousersand Petra Saltcellar I presume.

Larry goonish lark
 — larrylark

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