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(foto friday 2) Hollay for Hallewood
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Halle Berry
 1
Halle Onion
 2
Halle Tosis
 3
 
 
Yet always
 4
she's smelling
 5
of roses
 6
 
 
Holly Dreams
 7
Holly Yearns
 8
Halle Wood
 9
 
 
Criss crosses
 10
her pins
 11
in the nude.
 12


http://www.flickr.com/photos/rebba/171966912/

22 Aug 06

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IT SUCK
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ok....
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is this reba my cousin?
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wow you have a lot of family members logging on to this site . . . brothers, cousins, who'll pop up next . . . great aunt Edna? what are the odds?
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You should add smething between l2-3 and l8-9.
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Thanks for 'comments'. I think adding stuff would make it a bit pedantic, unk, but ta for the suggestion.
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i did not make the aboved comments, for i am not a subscriber of 'pedantics antics'
but thonks!
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Thanks onk for onking.
Ta bolog for your bologs.
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Goat boy has inspired me (I think).
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