Is there any poetry here? I'm not even sure why these words are strung together. I hope the poet will explain. — Kita
I liked the witiness of this little piece where the poet finds himself alone and complains about his absent readers. It is almost a playlet.
I also liked the ambiguity of 'heroes' ('very brave people' / 'small chocolates').
It was very clever, but also a little emo.
Perhaps the cleverness in this poem was largely accidental (but then only good poets get this kind of lucky).
Or perhaps you really are a very fine poet indeed (but on an off-day). — ferngulley
i'd say it's one of the best, i'd say... — varun
The line breaks speak volumes. This can be read in several different ways. — PhynneBelle