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hank

somebody told me today
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they said
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they believe
 3
they say
 4
they are right of
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that i must be sure
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but i saw an ant
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with an aphid in its jaws
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26 Aug 06

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very liberal use of grammar, not sure.
 — unknown

Somebody told me today
they say they belive they are right
they say I must be sure
that I did indeed
see an ant
with an aphid in its jaws.

Did I listen correctly? I'm not sure this is very poetic, or what you were meaning to convey. Your grammer confused me, too.
 — Kita

everytime mate.
brill.
 — varun

haha
 — unknown

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