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somebody told me today
they said
they believe
they say
they are right of
that i must be sure
but i saw an ant
with an aphid in its jaws

26 Aug 06

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very liberal use of grammar, not sure.
 — unknown

Somebody told me today
they say they belive they are right
they say I must be sure
that I did indeed
see an ant
with an aphid in its jaws.

Did I listen correctly? I'm not sure this is very poetic, or what you were meaning to convey. Your grammer confused me, too.
 — Kita

everytime mate.
 — varun

 — unknown