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-Haltingly-
netskyIam

found, rescued, an infant orphan squirrel
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see the link (first input) for photographs
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under our feet,
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for all we don't
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know...now
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to tread the earth lightly
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with our eyes open
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for tiny tears
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28 Aug 06

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http://tinyurl.com/llag7
 — netskyIam

Oh, my duckling, my duckling!  WAH!  
 — Isabelle5

poor Isabelle! did you once misstep? I didn't mean to bring up a loss like that.
oh, sorry.  I feel... pain.
 — netskyIam

I like the imagry in this poem. Its very good. I would not be able to understand it without the into though. That realy helped the poem pop off the page so to speak. I give this a 10/10. Very well done!
 — Kuai

nice poem reid.
 — unknown

It's a sugared little thing, and yeah, it really relies on the intro.
It was, and is intended as a -companion item- to the cited thread
where we saved a tiny, orphan squirrel.  
What it was about:
http://tinyurl.com/llag7
Is more important than the item.

Thanks for thinking and caring for weaklings.

r.
 — netskyIam

In Honour of
THE PULL of vEnUs,
top-rate pome of PC.

I laugh so easily.
 — netskyIam

tiny tears- so cute! :)
 — Anachocolata

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