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proverbial
netskyIam

a man who won
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two hundred wives
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dreamed
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to have just one
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4 Sep 06


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good proverb, bad poem. add something around it.
 — livella

Thanks.  Say, the linings and the -aural reading- suggest a completely different meaning that does the literal eye.   See it?  I mean, hear what I mean, if I were to read it aloud?
It's meant to be a trick, and it is.  Much obliged.  And YES, it could be a springboard for some longer poem appended; but! if this is the nut of the matter, what's the point of fol-der-rolling out more words words words?  Hmmm... I will think on your advice.

Reid
 — netskyIam

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