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good proverb, bad poem. add something around it.
Thanks. Say, the linings and the -aural reading- suggest a completely different meaning that does the literal eye. See it? I mean, hear what I mean, if I were to read it aloud?
It's meant to be a trick, and it is. Much obliged. And YES, it could be a springboard for some longer poem appended; but! if this is the nut of the matter, what's the point of fol-der-rolling out more words words words? Hmmm... I will think on your advice.
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