|poem by alex.
Just like death everything
is eventual,everything blooms
and too, everything decays
i think everything decays
i think so but i won't be there
i will not die.
9 Sep 06
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OMG, I love Stephen King too!!! I'm sure that you've read the short story collection of his called Everything is Eventual, right? Or is that even the title? I forget... But it's close! Or maybe it's the Bible.
Oh yes, the poem... It reminds me of one of those verses from the Bible about when things should be done: "There is a time to live, and a time to die." I'm sure you know about that. Too much of that "even" syllables for my taste, and I don't like how decay is used twice as a line closer in lines 5 and 6. Too soon too often in this poem. Decay is a good word, no doubt. It's wonderful for death metal. But even in death metal, it's not used that much. But don't mind me, I'm just a bored soul stuck at home. (Actually not really, but you know...)
Reminds me of one of the tagline things off of the Six Feet Under DVD's
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