i heard a hissing
and then another
in my wine some wood
and out of the woods
17 Oct 06
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Is that really the noise made when some off the cork is floating in your wine? Or is that another sound?
no , please try again .
I'm a bit slow. Wood as in somebody's erection?
correct me if I'm wrong, but "hissing" is an adjective, specifically a participle, and as it is doesn't make any sense because it is referred to as a common noun by "another". hissing sound, noise, bug, your mom?
i often think that i should add more to my poems.
slowly getting more and more cryptic. nice poem hank.
and it is the sound. yes.
how ya bin?
also, the affect and the effect of liquor, as an aphrodisiac. is how i read it.
nice... simplistic and clear. good stuff!
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