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the closing of the vaults
hank

an empty seat got crosses on it
 1
got crossed
 2
spent time good and bad
 3
just spent
 4
all is good and bad or
 5
beyond good and evil
 6
i believe
 7
i before e
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except after see
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i took an empty photograph
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i hold a fistful of air
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my shadow takes water
 12
but my body tastes wine
 13

23 Oct 06

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Fistful has one l
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This would be great as a song, with a chorus and everything. Think about it. Don't let this go, rework it. 8/10
 — Henry

THIS IS TIGHT
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