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clear bear death
hank

i overheard this story-
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a polar bear dies of hunger
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(the teller thought with glory)
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or of his tusky wounds
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(he was not meant for walrus)
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wrapped himself in planet earth
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coiled white and died
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so i recite to my own mind
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lies within a gem
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6 Nov 06

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l2 dieing not die

I think the reference to the hair of a polar bear being clear is too obscure
especially since your poem is very UNCLEAR
 — unknown

i'm in a mood to tell you to fuck off. who cares what you think?
 — hank

nobody really - lol

but by posting the poem - you were asking!

isn't it cool that all three words have ea in them? Wow.
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