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clear bear death

i overheard this story-
a polar bear dies of hunger
(the teller thought with glory)
or of his tusky wounds
(he was not meant for walrus)
wrapped himself in planet earth
coiled white and died
so i recite to my own mind
lies within a gem

6 Nov 06

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l2 dieing not die

I think the reference to the hair of a polar bear being clear is too obscure
especially since your poem is very UNCLEAR
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i'm in a mood to tell you to fuck off. who cares what you think?
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nobody really - lol

but by posting the poem - you were asking!

isn't it cool that all three words have ea in them? Wow.
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