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zodiac
hank

some you were made to meet be
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calm they can change them
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selves you are to but not meant
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to change them you will and force and
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this what is wanted by you and others
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this they do not and want not not
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because they are dumb but afraid
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no more scared than you
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just stuck
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have both feet
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different zodiacs
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(and this has nothing to do with you)
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27 Nov 06

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ooh cool
 — unknown

this is the most challenging poeme ever i ever rote
 — hank

Question:  What were you smoking when you wrote this incomprehensible blunder?
 — starr

Wait a second...I didn't wanna come off sounding rude, cuz I'm not a rude person.  I just wondered why this makes absolutely no English sense.  The whole syntax of it is just messed up.  I didn't mean to offend you.  I'm so not like that, but reading it left me feeling really frustrated.  Thanks.
 — starr

Lol
 — trochee

i read it with my own breaks. sorry it's frustrating. l
 — hank

cusps, indecisions, confusions?
i might give you also the benefit of 'lacking in knowledge'.
loved as usual mate.
 — varun

read it star. it all makes very good sense.
 — varun

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