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outside us
hank

i know that the prerequisite for life
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is not life like you know
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and you can not comprehend
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or in your own words
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put your mind around it
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you do not have to
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understand nor can you
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understand
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if small is too small
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if big is too big no matter
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imagination lives as well better
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than you or i
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29 Nov 06

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there is no imagination not you
the heads cursing their
bodies in the street and when
was the last time they
saw a kingfisher with old
mans legs and green
sequined tights

my point exactly
it pains me

i ate your poem
i hope you forgive me

betty
 — unknown

Except for lack of punctuation in helpful spots, this is a decent poem.  I think you have taken a hard topic and ground it down to useful size.  Nice attempt.
 — Isabelle5

Dude , this suxs , like big time for real .
" Whats Imagination "
 — unknown

and i burped a good one.

mr gonk ...
 — bettalpha

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