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The revolution
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light's alright in the morning for
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a good solid finish as i kick up out of sleep it says to me
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i say someday i will not have ever conquered
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Sad thoughts I will never have
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held an innocent extension of myself & I will have
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never Felt sorry for it andand I will never have left Love and its pretty little boys
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myself feeling satified so sigh
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right here I pull down my spine to pull up my socks in the midmorning
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Where I disassemble, really, wherein I
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Find a quiet practice to keep living for ,
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recollecting bits of a false life found in sleep
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and keeping
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all of my little pink babies crying out in deep Hell
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for deliverance
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I stare at the
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catfood blooming in the water.
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13 Dec 06

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consider deleting all but the last two lines.
its constructed badly and comes off jumpy and confusing.

there are some interesting ideas present though.
and whats with the title?
 — DeformedLion

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