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out of the paper bag
hank

with two friends one said
 1
write some years apart
 2
but never shared them i
 3
said he should gather them
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give them a way
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(out of the paper bag)
 6

18 Dec 06


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i like paper bags. the use of paper bag works well here.
but i don't know about the brackets

much love to you and yours and to gonk (smile)
 — bettalpha

Love to you 2 b .
Happy Christmas T V R .
Gonk .
 — unknown

hey gonk

i miss you
 — bettalpha

i dream about you sometimes

it is very pretty
 — bettalpha

and sexy of course. grin
 — bettalpha

done.

this one was the best'o'the bunch...

http://poetry.tetto.o rg/read/18798/

thanks
 — chuckles

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