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Spirit Of The Future

The Mansion House is haunted
by future presences
that have settled beneath blank skies.
A ghostly jig will be briefly danced  
to clatter among shackles and chains.  
The remaining dead will lay themselves down,
discontented that they have been replaced.

7 Jan 07

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Well I like this poem a lot. I understand it, maybe in my own way. good job
 — vida

Dear Vida

This poem is very influenced gy "The Dead Come Back To Us In Dreams" by one of my favourite poets, Goeffrey Wainwright. Thanks for the positive comment.

 — larrylark

 — listen

Thanks Listen

 — larrylark