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Boredoms overtake Youth
dustybottoms

The steamship turtled its way through ports
 1
bump, bump, bump the drum!
 2
Billows overtook the skies
 3
Darkness followed the sun's orbit
 4
eclipsing all from the light!
 5
Even the hands of radios could not explain
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the seagull's eyes darkened;;
 7
Gotham has begun!
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i wrote this blazed as hell after listening to Bad Moon Rising.

15 Jan 07


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