Hi number two. So! You like to laugh. Thanks. I've adjusted the title for humor (gothtard instead of goth), put "loser" on L1 in place of "gothtard", and put "satan" on the last line in place of "the devil", for slightly better (still imperfect) metering.
Thanks for number one and thanks to Jillian: a perfect ten herself. — netskyIam
made me laugh. for a minute I was put off by the rhyme but when I finished it felt perfect. — theair