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kisses, an ending.

movement dividing
the space between two figures
seeks to dismiss what's plural.
they will never,i say,
move closer,
they will never say,
i have met
warm company
for ever-
and so, they say
we tried.

22 Jan 07

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this is niiiiiiice!

i love the first stanza. Very creative way to show two figures moving apart.
though i wanted something more in the 2nd stanza. but i think the lesser it is .. the more concerning i get as a reader... so it works for me.

i like the ending too..
 — trochee

Oh i am glad its you... OkComputer ... i always wanted to read some of your work.
 — trochee

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I hear she has a smelly muff
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