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the herd is nudged on by the nose
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of those coming up the rear
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11 Feb 07

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insightful!
 — bellavida

the title is completely misleading and doesn't explain the content in the poem.

the actual content itself is interesting. certainly that sense of progression and replacemet. i picture a conveyorbelt.

there is nothing poetic about this, but its simplicity works.

7/10
 — Esoteric

did you hear about randolph - the brown nosed reindeer? he was just behind rudolph - but couldn't stop as quick :)
 — unknown

i think this title is perfect.
 — unknown

welcome to joax'r'us
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