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patsies
hank

there is no way you can believe
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that the politicians we entertain
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are not pansies
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bees be wise to ultra violet
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while humans inhale a scent off
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(plato's firelight reflexion)
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a business adage
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"never deal with the end user"
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what i am saying is this:
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'the politicians we read about
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have not their own pistil
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tickling their own stamen'
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forgive the comparison
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of pansies to flowers
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9 Mar 07

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 — unknown

Umm... I really didn't get the point of this "poem."
 — mylifestyle

at first, i was flummoxed at the appearance of the inherent explanation.
but i wised up.

nice dual poem, hank.
 — varun

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