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Hyperglycemia during a walk
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Hands like false teeth.
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Underneath balmy skin something
 2
itches, thickens. I dig and pull,
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carve with blackened nails, wrists to elbows,
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raking the belly of my forearms
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in rhythm to Scriabin’s grieving piano—
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I stumble grossly beneath
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an emergency glow: neon blue
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half-light reflects off glassy pavement
 9
from long, dark, iron posts—
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miniature supernovas flicker
 11
at their ends, blanketing the moon,
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smothering night-rest and dew.
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Now, this meditation
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crackles and splits like gasps from
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an original transistor radio.
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16 Mar 07

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this is great, i really dig the first verse especially, the images you use are ones i can really sink my teeth into. thanks for posting this.
 — wemsntdspair

hyper or hypo?
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