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True love
totalyLost

This one isn't one of my best...but it's alright...for a sucky one I guess ^_^

It's a mystery
 1
it's a quiz
 2
It's a puzzled unsolved
 3
there is always something missing
 4
but where is it?
 5
look for one with unconditional love
 6
there is where what's missing is
 7
Now and forever you and your love
 8
forever together with eternal love
 9
fprever combined untill the time has come
 10
for one to pass to the world of the dead
 11
it's always a mystery
 12
it's always a quiz
 13
it's forever undone
 14

26 Mar 07


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forever undone or forever tattooed to the chest of the bearer? haha i like this.
 — brokenarrows

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