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a farewell to winter
OKcomputer

my body seems better
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in the cold:
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skin tighter, breasts that seem
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better, whiter.
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better for others, who peek
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beneath, who peak eventually
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into me. it seems smaller,
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whiter, ready for things
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that will make me
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tighter, gripping things
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indoors in the dark. it is
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better in the winter. goodbye
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for an hour. goodbye and good day
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and hello to some flower.
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29 Mar 07

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LMAO.
 — OKcomputer

it is sunny where i am.
the snow has almost melted.
i will become tighter with the onset of spring.
thanks for posting.
 — unknown

great poem, hilarious.
i missed "taut", but nah, you don't need it.
enjoyed, thanks.
 — jenakajoffer

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