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gray green black
netskyIam

All of theory tends toward gray
 1
like the leaden sky.
 2
 
 
Life prefers the green, the tree
 3
where offered shade, we lie.
 4

2 Apr 07


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Reid, the opening two lines don't work for me,
it's not the boredom that does it
maybe it's the pain?



All of theory struggles
with the endless sky

Life prefers the green, the tree
where offered shade

we lie
 — unknown

i'd only say 'the' isn't needed between 'like' and 'leaden'.

nice poem.

v.
 — unknown

Go tell them in  Lacedaemonia , passerby
we did our duty
and here we lie
a lot
shamelessy
 — unknown

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