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The Tumor
ChedelSol

It’s there—somewhere
 1
Behind that most sensitive,
 2
Subjective of black walls.
 3
An undetectable tumor
 4
Firing neurons at random
 5
In circles most times,
 6
Like a psychedelic merry-go-round
 7
The carnival music that milks terror
 8
And the sugar high—giddiness
 9
Manic—fun, fun, fun
 10
Exhausted, the machine breaks down—
 11
The tumor, in its self-righteous glory
 12
Pulsates with energy,
 13
sneering at its slave body
 14
appeasing its addiction
 15
of Power…ah! The power,
 16
Endless pots of coffee and cartons of cigarettes.
 17
An amazing display of corruption…
 18
A helpless psyche—at the mercy of
 19
Praise and attention, starved of love,
 20
Not noticing the masses parading around.
 21
An endless procession of nameless, faceless smiles.
 22
How sickening! A threat to all those sacred broodings,
 23
That comfortably numbing labor of sleepless nights.
 24
False! No true understanding of ideas and man
 25
Just the content masturbation of life for its own sake...
 26
There is no parade of the lonely souls
 27
Of defective origin- radiating obscurity.
 28
No banners or balloons—no noise at all
 29
Just the weeping of solitary violins,
 30
Drowned out by three-hundred channels
 31
Of Hi-Definition celebration—mind’s eye of the world
 32
That “other” world, far above those trembling hearts
 33
Of cripples hidden away in dungeons.
 34
Dimly lit by Puritan  candles and bare,
 35
Ascetic rooms, sparse furnishings—unkempt
 36
No sound to be sure…the tortuous dripping,
 37
Grey water, through cracks in the ceiling
 38
Tap, tap, tap…that monotonous, maddening
 39
Metronome—keeping the time,
 40
To deaf ears, engrossed in compulsions,
 41
Obsessive delusions of genius and weight.
 42
Tap, tap, tap—countdown to the end, at least for a while
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The hooded demons come as they will,
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Who’s to stop them? When they’ve shredded every piece of insight
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Burned any remnant of satisfaction.
 46
Taunting the poor recluse—
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With no one to confess that haunting secret
 48
The winged rats, daemonic apparitions
 49
Enticed to destroy all in sight—
 50
It’s poetic end, as it must be
 51
Induced by the very mind that spawned a world of salvation,
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For himself his own Jesus— a tumor.
 53
For all other entities of dreams and visions,
 54
Forsake his mind at its desperate hour.
 55
The hypnotic, thousand-yard stare...
 56
Penetrates through cheap canvas—beyond,
 57
That high plain devoid of heavenly bodies.
 58
Beyond any supernatural domain, it lies inside—
 59
Inside that all-consuming tumor
 60
Of staggering heights …the intangible,
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Boxed and stacked on shelves
 62
A secret reservoir, selectively permeable
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To only those with nothing else
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A token victory—surely to be found
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Among the smoldering ash and ruin
 66
When at last the opus is bled dry,
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The requiem for anything…
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Anything that might last.
 69
That could withstand the hell-fire
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And the thrashing of ungodly claws
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To be preserved—
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Once the tumor slowly eats away
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At itself—imploding, self-destructing
 74
Into a single, infinitely dense singularity
 75
Then gone, all that once brought death and destruction
 76
That waged war with both heaven and hell,
 77
That fought for a place among the elements, and a stage—
 78
Obliterated in an instant.
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Still no noise…no tapping of water, no violin...
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Just the metallic ping of a single shell falling to the floor.
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5 Apr 07


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