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When you asked me if it was too soon to propose

unknown

I advised	1
waiting;	2

now I wait	3
suspecting I got it wrong	4

implicated	5
by uncertainty	6

your whole life	7
shaped	8

by a chance you	9
didn’t take	10

7 Apr 07

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