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Life

Life	1
is simple.	2
As if	3
you were eating	4
a microwavable	5
you bought	6
on Wal Mart	7
on a Friday night.	8
A microwavable	9
you've ate	10
a million times	11
but always	12
tasted	13
damn good	14
with the tube	15
on	16
and a plastic	17
bottle	18
of Lipton	19
Green Tea	20
by your side.	21

Life is	22
unpredictable.	23
So unpredictable	24
that	25
whenever your	26
having	27
a tasty	28
picnic in	29
Utopia land	30
with cheesy	31
elevator	32
music	33
playing in the	34
background.	35
A mesmorizing	36
lady	37
can appear	38
from a long distance,	39
and before	40
you know it.	41
She's	42
Ernest Borgnine	43
five inches	44
away.	45

7 Apr 07

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