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middle distance

in the middle distance there is nothing
you see  but still  your eyes
settle in to the long long all
tinge of blue

8 May 07

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I enjoyed this poem and wonder if the extra spaces before and after "but still" was on purpose, as in the middle distance. Paints a good picture. I am surprised that no one has ever commented on this poem before. Nice.
 — unknown

thank unknown. yes, spaces.
 — hank